Audience feedback

As a class, we watched each-others films and was given feedback. Our audience feedback was produced by a range of positive and negative improvement methods.

The features of our which was most liked:

• good cutaways
• good heartbeat
• good slow motion
• good reaction shots
• 'fast forward' editing
• Mabinas legs walking
• titles

The features of our film which was disliked:

• awkward silence at the beginning
• the fast forward bit contrasted to the slow motion shots
• camera a bit shaky
• pan a bit slow
• Dylan ( a boy) moves in the last shot
• lack of continuity

The assumed target audience:

• teenagers
• 15 +
• teens to adults
• everyone - teens

The assumed target audience was correct, our film is directed towards teenagers.

We will improve our bad feedback by;

awkward silence at the beginning - we will add in a voice over

the fast forward bit contrasted to the slow motion shots - we will make the fast forward shot slightly slower and add in more time zone shots so it looks more natural

camera a bit shaky - we've added in more effects so you do not notice the bad camera work as much

pan a bit slow - we made it fast using fast forward effect

Dylan ( a boy) moves in the last shot - we CUT him out of the shot by making it shorter