Today we put the finishing touches to the presentation for our pitch and began writing a draft for our script. We took into account comments and critcisims given on our first practice pitch and made changes accordingly. For example we changed our powerpoint so that each slide had less writing on it so that our pitch would not be focused around each slide - rather focused around what we have to say. We also included a new part of the pitch talking about our target audidence and how we will fit our film around our target audience's expectations.
We have now written a script to use in conjunction with the powerpoint. Each member of our team has a copy of the script and will learn their lines so that when the pitch time comes we will not just be reading from sheets.

We have also added to our blog today, writing about what we have changed to our pitch so that it will get the marks we need.